The role of education is to prepare children for the modern world. Schools should cut art and music out of the curriculum so that children can focus on useful subjects such as information technology. To what extent do you agree?
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It is undoubtedly true that the prime aim of the educational system is preparing youngsters for the future.
While
it may seem like a practical idea to eliminate Art
and Music
as subjects from schools and teach other curriculums such
as Information Technology instead
, I completely disagree. First of all, Art
can improve pupils’ creativity and enhance their memory. This
is mainly because Art
provokes children to utilize their imagination abilities frequently which solidates the neural network related to creativity in their brains. Moreover
, most Art
students have to visualize what they are going to work at first and then
they work from their memories which strengthens their long-term memory. In 2009, for instance
, a study was conducted on artists by Harvard University showed that artists have the same IQ level as Math scientists and less likely to have Alzheimer
when they grow up. Change noun form
Alzheimer's
In addition
, music
can reduce violence
among students. This
is due to
its sedating effect on pupils’ brains which makes them feel safe and unstressed. In Kenya, for example
, when they introduced music
as a separate subject to primary school students, violence
among them dropped by 50%. In contrast
, if educational authorities replaced music
by
other Change preposition
with
subject
, pupils would be stressed for longer hours which can lead to Fix the agreement mistake
subjects
violence
; teaching music
should be obligatory in all public and private schools. To conclude
, due to
their benefits such
as improving students’ creativity and decreasing violence
among pupils, I completely believe that Art
and Music
must be taught in all schools.Submitted by AHMED ABDEEN on
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