Old people suffer from loneliness and health related problem. What are the causes behind this.
Aged people get worried about the possibility by which they can live alone and earn possible
deseases
due.I will offer my ideas based on finding causes of an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
diseases
this
problem
To begin
with,
many people all over the world live without family members and care Accept space
,
by
them or anyone else.It leads to variety Suggestion
of
ilmesses
and create dark atmosphere in the place they live.impairment of normal physiological function affecting part or all of an organism
illnesses
Moreover it
causes terrible incidents Accept comma addition
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such
as suicid
, self-harming or some the act of killing yourself
suicide
suicides
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phisical
and mental involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit
physical
diabilities
.the condition of being unable to perform as a consequence of physical or mental unfitness
disabilities
In other words
,
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,
lifes
of these people will be spoiled to the rest of their Suggestion
the lives
lives
lifes
and if volunteersa characteristic state or mode of living
lives
life
,
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,
goverment
managers or family members the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
dont
undertake needful measures for saving their do not
don't
lifes
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lives
life
lifes
which a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
life
legs
transfering
to transfer somebody to a different position or location of work
transferring
this
form has
many Suggestion
have
reaosons
.a rational motive for a belief or action
reasons
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of all ,
Accept space
,
main cause
of unhappy Suggestion
the main cause
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of aged
people is their relatives who Suggestion
aging
couldnt
provide attention or look after them as good relatives they have to be for them.It is important to be close to them as much as possible.could not
couldn't
Secondly
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the Suggestion
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life
of every person should take a care a government also
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life
,
if government Accept space
,
cant
provide can not
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under head for those who live without connection with Suggestion
the roof
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the external world
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,
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,
then
they one of the causers.But measure which can be directed to solve this
problem is pay attention for every persons
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person's
life
without any exceptions.Finally
, old
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older
people unfortunately
could be the cause of their sad Accept comma addition
people, unfortunately
life
situation because of their bad lifestyle or unpretentious attitude to relatives and consequently
create problem
for themselves.To avoid Suggestion
problems
a problem
this
,
it is enough to be Accept space
,
tolerate
and polite in Suggestion
tolerated
comuncation
with people and conduct health lifestyle
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and mental involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit
physical
deseases
are an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
diseases
solvable but
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solvable, but
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fact that it is still existing
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still exists
solution
for overcoming it forever.Suggestion
a solution
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the solution
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