Some people prefer to live in hot climate; however, others prefer to live in cold regions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Preferences of people
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whether to live in extreme conditions or
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in balanced ares in terms of weather are differing from each other.For me
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second type
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the second type
a second type
of whether to live is viewed as attractive.
To begin
with
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the effect of sun on people has many benefits
such
as enhancing
appearance
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the appearance
of skin or improving peoples durability.For
this
reason many people find it useful to live under the sun.One more reason is peoples desires to spend holidays in hot conditions because it affords to be able to spend holidays in pleasure with swimming and sunbathing.
Moreover
a lot of people living in hot temperature areas like
Africa UAE
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Africa, UAE
or other African regions get used to live without any fears or claims because there is authority to change the climate created by nature
On the other hand
cold conditions create a lot of pleasure to be loved.
For instance
million children around the world are waiting for winter to enjoy doing winter sports
such
as snowboarding
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ice rink and others.
Moreover cold
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Moreover, cold
weather creates a special atmosphere and could be attractive for those who get tired to live under sun whole year.Hot climate at many times couldn't be possible to work without fatigue and it is proved that it makes trouble for workers while cold condition might be tolerated by people.Despite reasons
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above weather
above whether
is better to live directly depend on certain region and
weather
introduces two alternatives
whether
people tend to live with.
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conclusion, however
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the hot temperature
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sunshine
  • outdoor lifestyle
  • year-round activities
  • sunbathing
  • cozy
  • landscapes
  • winter sports
  • skiing
  • snowboarding
  • health benefits
  • vitamin D synthesis
  • sense of community
  • overcoming challenges
  • tolerance
  • seasonal change
  • dynamic
  • ever-changing environment
  • invigoration
  • renewal
  • unpredictable weather
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