You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: * explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months * say how your work could be done while you are away * ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to express my interest in working at our company's main headquarter office in Toronto
, Canada for a few months to attain more valuable skills and get exposure of
our product Change preposition
to
sales
at international
market. I think that Add an article
the international
an international
this
experience will be very beneficial to escalate sales
of our products from India
to other countries.
As you know that, I have been working in our company for the past ten years as Sales
Manager in Delhi, India
. Last
year, I got promoted to senior manager
position who Replace the word
management
hold
the responsibility to manage Change the verb form
holds
sales
of 5 states in India
. I have noticed that from 3 month
Add a hyphen
3-month
sales
of our products are struggling. Therefore
, I think that's I need to work with overseas clients at the Toronto
office branch who can teach me valuable skills to boost sales
at larger
scale. During that time, I will Add an article
a larger
also
obtain valuable experience of the international market in Toronto
, which is the hub of global
market.
Can you please consider me for part of our upcoming products at Add an article
the global
Toronto
officeCorrect article usage
the Toronto
.
Please Change the punctuation
?
also
arrange flight expenses which are covered by our employees
benefit programme.
I have talked with the HR manager who will appoint Change to a genitive case
employee's
employees'
previous
Change the article
the previous
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manager
manger
for 3 months to handle the Correct your spelling
manager
sales
in India
. I will regularly be checking the status of sales
through emails.
I will be waiting for positive
response.
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a positive
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Yours
Your
faithfully,
Ranbir SandhuCorrect your spelling
Yours
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite