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Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings, while others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land. What solution is better?

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High-rise buildings are becoming increasingly popular these years in many metropolitan cities,
however in
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however, in
 some other regions the low and broad houses are still the mainstream due to its special geographical features. In my opinion, both of them have irreplaceable merits. On the one hand, for many big cities, they are facing the problem of the shortage of land, and the limited residential area cannot catch up with the rising population,
then
as a result
,
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,
 the best way to solve
this
 challenge is
build
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building
more tall
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tallest
taller
 buildings in the city, which make it possible to accommodate the large number of city dwellers.
In addition
, from the individual perspective, living in these buildings enable them to enjoy a better ventilation, with
fresh air quality
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the fresh air quality
 and comfortable sanitary that the other forms of livings cannot provide.
On the other hand
, constructing low
bungalow perhaps
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bungalow, perhaps
 have more benefits than the high-rise building. For Some cities which are frequently suffering from natural disasters would be safer to promote their citizens to live in a low altitude house, which could help them to escape easily. Particularly
for
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in
 some coastal cities in Japan, Indonesia and China. It is reported from scientific research that it is 7 times more dangerous to live in the tall buildings for the people who live in these areas than in the wide and low houses if they encounter emergency cases,
such
 as typhoon
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,
 earthquake and tsunami.
However
, the drawback of
this
 building is rather obvious.
The great
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The greater
 number of low buildings have a negative effect on the city's image and
also
 make them
looks
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look
 more crowded
.
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.
 In conclusion, in order to meet modern people's living demand
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,
 it is necessary to provide taller buildings as long as the environmental condition is suitable.
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