Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings, while others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land. What solution is better?

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High-rise buildings are becoming increasingly popular these years in many metropolitan cities,

however in

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however, in

some other regions the low and broad houses are still the mainstream due to its special geographical features. In my opinion, both of them have irreplaceable merits. On the one hand, for many big cities, they are facing the problem of the shortage of land, and the limited residential area cannot catch up with the rising population,

then

as a result

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the best way to solve

this

challenge is

build

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building

more tall

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tallest

taller

buildings in the city, which make it possible to accommodate the large number of city dwellers.

In addition

, from the individual perspective, living in these buildings enable them to enjoy a better ventilation, with

fresh air quality

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the fresh air quality

and comfortable sanitary that the other forms of livings cannot provide.

On the other hand

, constructing low

bungalow perhaps

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bungalow, perhaps

have more benefits than the high-rise building. For Some cities which are frequently suffering from natural disasters would be safer to promote their citizens to live in a low altitude house, which could help them to escape easily. Particularly

for

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some coastal cities in Japan, Indonesia and China. It is reported from scientific research that it is 7 times more dangerous to live in the tall buildings for the people who live in these areas than in the wide and low houses if they encounter emergency cases,

such

as typhoon

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earthquake and tsunami.

However

, the drawback of

this

building is rather obvious.

The great

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The greater

number of low buildings have a negative effect on the city's image and

also

make them

looks

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look

more crowded

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In conclusion, in order to meet modern people's living demand

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it is necessary to provide taller buildings as long as the environmental condition is suitable.

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urban density
sustainability
public transportation
green spaces
community connections
overcrowding
economic implications
infrastructure impact
maintenance costs
carbon footprint
compact city
habitat destruction
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