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Somme people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history

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Historical topics should be included in school subjects to remain the ancients of
past
Suggestion
the past
 and their cultures alive. Some people support the above idea.
On the other hand
, some believe that learning brains should be taught
science
 and technology because their outcomes will introduce the world with newer and modern inventions. I strongly agree with the later idea of introducing the subjects like
science
 and applied
science
 in educational sectors.
Furthermore
,
science
 which includes studies about animals, plants, chemicals, physics and
mysteries
Suggestion
the mysteries
 behind various things taking place in the surroundings. Apart from those interesting subjects which are full of miracles existing in the world, the history sounds boring to the students who wants to learn creative things as
this
 subject is crowded with era's and the names of the rulers and leader, which are difficult to pronounce and memorize.
However
, to some extend, I support the former statement
also
 because every culture
do have
Suggestion
does have
 their rules, regulation and limitations made by their ancestors and forefathers to be followed.
Hence due
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Hence, due
 to the variety of traditions possessed by diverse communities they seem attractive.
Further more history
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Furthermore, history
Furthermore history
 not only have the information of the leader and the scholars, but it
do store
Suggestion
does store
 the scientific information
for example
, the ongoing pandemic situation should be added to the history for the later generations, So that they should be aware of its life threatening circumstances. In conclusion, Everything
do have
Suggestion
does have
 importance on its own in learning world. So as per my
perspective these
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perspective, these
 all three subjects should be taught to the students in schools because somewhere in life they may
seems
Suggestion
seem
 helpful.
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