some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

Information
is a vital source for knowledge, if a person lacks
information
of
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about
a
partiulare
unique or specific to a person or thing or category
particular
thing,
then
to gain knowledge about it is futile.
Information
is power and to share
this
power there will be consequences. 
Although
, it is considered by
few pupils
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a few pupils
that the more the
mins
that which is responsible for one's thoughts and feelings; the seat of the faculty of reason
mind
means'
know about everything, the
more it is beneficial
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more beneficial it is
.
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Whereas
,
few
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a few
also
think that
such
a piece of
price
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the price
cannot be known without effort.
However
, both the views are subjected to be justifies
further
. Internal
information
is always vital to share. The more the mouths talk about it
with
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by
adding their views, there are higher the chances of its destruction.
Although
, the scientific researchers who work for decades to research on a particular object and when the time comes for the praise and pride, it is known that it is achieved by someone else.
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things,
more
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the more
the private, the more it is beneficial.
For example
,
initially
in the eighteen cetury when the pharmacology was not too advanced, at that time doctores nd researchers were developing and testing many medications and vaccines, at that time there was a case when one country lost the honour of discovery, because the chemical formula was stolen from laboratory and was handed toanother country.
this
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This
happens when the
information
is not kept in privacy.
Nevertheless
, business and academics are
also
working in
same manner
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the same manner
. If the businessman, before executing the scheme, announces the
next
move
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move, then
then
other businessmen will learn it and will come up with
stratergies
an elaborate and systematic plan of action
strategies
to defeat it.
For example
, when
steve
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Steve
jobs announced
further
ahead that he was going to launch windows on
this
date, Bill gates launched windows ten days before it and ultimately the profit was lost for
steve
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Steve
jobs.
On the contrary
, there are benefits
also
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indicating the most important performer or role
leading
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in conveying the private content.
Although
, if they are not able to accomplish the task after a lot of trials,
then
they need help.
For example
, if the exams are near and one is studying with the acknowledgement of their friends, and a doubt
rose
come into existence; take on form or shape
arose
,
then
consulting a friend is beneficial
then
learning wrong. In conclusion, my opinion is that the vital and private
information
are
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is
to be kept in secrecy, because the more it spreads, the more it causes harm. Whereas, providing valuable content without the price is
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in generous
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