Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What possible solutions can you suggest?

Some people tend to believe that some criminals commit
further
crimes as soon as they are released from prison. There are many reasons that push offenders
to break
Suggestion
break
lows again and again.
First
, most of them are not accepted by their families.
Second
, some of
criminals
Suggestion
the criminals
have been influenced and encouraged by other offenders to follow criminal lifestyle.
Third
, lack of employment and rehabilitation.
First
of all, it has happened that all offenders released from prison are considered dangerous for the society. Even some family members accept that ex-prisoner relatives as a grave threat.
Therefore
, some of the them have become homeless.
In addition
to family problems, they
also
have problems with getting a job. It has become impossible for
ex-
prisoners to find a
Suggestion
prisoners find a
well-paid job. Some companies are reluctant to provide employment to a person accused of a crime.
For example
, the employer may fear that the ex-prisoner continues the malpractices and even cause loss to the company. Another reason which encourages them to get into crime again is society’s indifferent attitude to their problems. Many
ex-prisoners
who have faced all these problems have become more aggressive and do not want to accept social stigma. In my opinion, it is the governments’ dues to help and support
ex-prisoners
. They should provide financial assistance.
For instance
, prisoners could be trained to do useful jobs while they are in prison.
Moreover
, psychological help is
also
necessary. If
ex-prisoners
see encouraging examples, they could overcome their problems.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Rehabilitation
  • Reintegrate
  • Social stigma
  • Recidivism
  • Criminal records
  • Ex-offender
  • Associations
  • Comprehensive
  • Workforce
  • Mentoring
  • Incentivize
  • Stigmatize
  • Subsidies
  • Legitimate
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