Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

Settling down in your new space of living, wherever it's an
apartment
or a
house
, has its own advantages and disadvantages. At
first
sight, we can easily imagine that living in a
house
is better than living in a building. There are some reasons why we can tend to think that, living in a
house
gives us a feeling of freedom, of growth and a sense of
whole
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wholeness
. To own your
house
is to own your security and your tomorrows, even if you rent it, the feeling of attachment is stronger.
In
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On
the other hand, living in
a
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an
apartment
is different, you don't feel as attached to the place and it might be more suitable for young people who are
suceptible
(often followed by 'of' or 'to') yielding readily to or capable of
susceptible
to move more often, you can
also
create a bond with your neighbour whom you share proximity with. Living in
a
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an
apartment
means less spending in a short-term and can appears more attractive for young people
aho
the person or persons that; the one that
who
are looking for cheaper alternatives and easy to manage places. When it comes to the disadvantages, the challenge to
buil
make by combining materials and parts
build
social relations with your
neighbor
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
neighbour
is bigger as the feeling of distance is stronger, To manage a
house
is
also
more challenging as you are responsible for any repairs, that adds on to the expenses
og
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
owning a
house
. To finish, if you decide to sell your
house
in the future, it can be a
difficukt
not easy; requiring great physical or mental effort to accomplish or comprehend or endure
difficult
task as it depends on the market and on the demands.
However
, an
apartment
has
also
disadvantages as it is usually smaller than a
house
and doesn't provide you with the feeling of growth. To conclude and to sum it up, I have lived in a
house
with my
oarents
a father or mother; one who begets or one who gives birth to or nurtures and raises a child; a relative who plays the role of guardian
parents
and later in an
apartment
by myself. Living in a
house
really gives you a sense of growth, a sense of
achievment
the action of accomplishing something
achievement
,
establshment
Suggestion
the establishment
establishment
and security, it is more stable. In my experience, an
apartment
is more like a temporary but
convenient solution
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a convenient solution
depending on your situation. There are both advantages and disadvantages of living in a
house
compared with living in an
apartment
.
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