Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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Many
people
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believe that advertisements motivate the audience to buy the things which they really need not buy, but
other
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opine the viewpoint that they provide information about the new entries in the market which can make our life more easy and comfortable. I partially support both opinions, that somehow it is beneficial and at the same time creates unnecessary demands among the viewers.
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people
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think that the advertisement is the biggest scam
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legal and approved by the government and the common
people
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. By the use of many big celebrities, they influenced the choice of their followers and promote brands and increased sales figures. These influences create the fake demand for the product and tell benefits for using that.
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they personally do not use those products. Which is somehow harmful to their followers and a clear breach of
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trust. For
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instant, in 2014 famous cricketer M.S. Dhoni endorsed the brand Amrapali
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buy
luxury
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a luxury
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home their fans invested lots of amounts on that project and after 5 years no construction has been started and
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the money
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of those fans has been stuck in that project. So, One should use their own mind rather than following the advert. On the flip side, It
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beneficial if used to provide correct information to viewers. It provides a wide knowledge of the products and the buyer has multiple choices for their need. Apart from
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is let us know about the ongoing offers and deals where one can get a smart discount on their purchase.
Such
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as The USA Black-Friday deals and Indias Diwali Deals where most of the company has come up with many offers for their customers. Apart from an individual, it has other benefits as well,
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is a vast industry that generates millions of jobs and many
people
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depend on it for their livelihoods. To sum up, with the given details it is crystal clear that the advertising industry has pros and cons and to understand that consumers have to be smart and active who can utilize the information for their profit not get trapped by the many celebrity faces.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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