You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you. Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.

Dear sir, I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with my roommate and request to you for new accommodation in
next
term. I can not study any more in our room because he always has friends visiting and they do parties there till late
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, several times a week.
Consequently
,
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very hard
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me concentrate on study
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when the exams are
close
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.
Furthermore
, he takes my
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without asking me. Now I can not tolerate
this
situation. Because I need
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environment to study. I am requesting to you please arrange another room for me
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upcoming term. It would be more convenient for me not
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my room with someone else. I am looking forward to hearing some good from you.
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Faithful Harpreet Singh Chahal
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