Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. why do many working people not get enough exercise? what can be done about this problem?

With

this

letter, I am applying for a position in the MSc. Web and Data Science program offered at the University of Koblenz-Landau. During my current experience as Senior Banking System Administrator accessing our DB2 database and designing many middleware programs and complex reports for our big data excited me to search for a new skill set to identify and

analyze

consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning

analyse

the right data. I was able to extend my knowledge and do some statistical analysis of the data but I always knew how much potential it can provide and how better it could lead to much more refined business decision,

although

starting working full time during my

last

year of Bachler degree help me get valuable experience, it

also

affected my score but not my final project. I applied to Master in Technology Management in my country which has interesting courses, but to be

honest it

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is not what I need to build skills in a hands-on job that deal with data at a professional level. The lake of

such

program in my country lead the way to find your program,

this

interdisciplinary course which will not only give me the academic knowledge I need in data science but

also

will give me the freedom to select exactly what I require for

further

develop my career in banking administration, especially with courses like Risk Management or Business Software courses. Many factors make

this

course extremely suitable for me, academic freedom and how it expects students to work autonomously is outstanding. With

also

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this

will make a wonderful future career for me.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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