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International travel is becoming cheaper ad more countries are opening their doors to increase the number of tourists. Do the advantages of increasing tourism outweigh the disadvantages?

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Travel abroad is currently
become
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becoming
 popular. It is becoming cheaper and many countries around the world opening the doors to enlarge the number of tourists.
This
 essay will discuss why the advantages of increasing tourists in fact outweigh the disadvantages.
To begin
 with, it is important to allow
foriegn
of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)
foreign
 people to our
country
 because having tourists is
affect
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affecting
 our economy in a positive
results
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result
. When
foriegn
of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)
foreign
 people come to travel they would buy thing from our
country
;
Accept space
;
 it would make our GDP (Gross domestic product) grow up. In
additon
a component that is added to something to improve it
addition
, we would
also
 exchange our traditions and cultures
to
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with
 them.
Consequently
, our cultures will be spread and our
country
 would be a famous place.
Moreover
, exchanging cultures will allow people in our
country
 to speak
second
 language
,
Accept space
,
which lead people to contact more business overseas. There are
also
 disadvantages but not as much as advantages. Allowing people enter our
coutry
a politically organized body of people under a single government
country
 might cause negative effects.
For example
, if other countries have virus pandemic
,
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,
they would come and spread the virus. Our people would be infected.
Moreover
,
foriegn
of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)
foreign
people
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people, for
for
example if
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example, if
 they come to our
country
 and do something not appropriate our
country
 would be notorious to others' sight. In conclusion, there is more positive than negative effects that to allow
foriegn
of concern to or concerning the affairs of other nations (other than your own)
foreign
 people
travel
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to travel
travelling
 to our
country
 because tourists advocate our economy by buy using our service.These increase the GDP and lead unemployed people to be employed
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