you have read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter Correct the information in the article Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information. Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation.
Dear Sir Or Madam,
I am writing to bring to your notice about my native's erroneous
information
published in your latest edition, and requesting
you to circulate the accurate details in the upcoming release.
Change the form of the verb
request
Although
the information
around tourist activities were
captured correctly, specific details around watersport and cuisine were not represented accurately. While snorkelling remains active until August, it's been published that Change the verb form
was
this
activity closes by June. Furthermore
, my hometown is specialized in sea food
, but your recent release conveys that we lack in Correct your spelling
seafood
this
type of food.
Since your magazine is blessed with a large number of readers, it is imperative to provide clear information
about the city. As my hometown is completely dependent on the tourism industry, these false details would affect many families, and it might create an impact in the upcoming holiday period.
Hence
requesting to re-publish this
article with accompanying pictures of snorkelling and seafood. Also
, please reach out to our tourism community to verify the information
for better clarity.
Please let me know if I could be of any assistance in this
regard.
Yours faithfully,
Subbu Arumugam GandhiSubmitted by GGAN on
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