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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree? Provide relevant examples if necessary.

#salary #job #satisfaction
Sometimes it is argued that big salary is more important than
job
satisfaction
. I will discuss
this
 in detail.
Firstly
, when someone comes from a very poor family with lots of financial crisis, they will have lots of importance of
money
.
For instance
, myself, I came from financially below average family. As
such
,
money
 has more value at me than
job
satisfaction
. But
on the other hand
, when we don't have
job
satisfaction
, In the long-term
this
 will lead to psychological and health problems. When someone who is working somewhere, where he does not have
job
satisfaction
, after going home from
work
, he will take his frustration on his wife and children.
Thus
, leads to family tensions. When a couple fights, it will affect their child psychology.
On the other hand
, now I will discuss the case of
job
satisfaction
. When a person compromises for
money
 and joins where he has
job
satisfaction
, comparatively for lesser salary, he will not have stress at
work
,
hence
 cool at home after going from
work
, can spend valuable time and
hence forth
from this time forth; from now on
henceforth
, healthy family,
finally
 healthy nation. When someone works with
job
satisfaction
, he can grow in that
company
 itself, with the efforts of full dedication and hard
work
. If not in the existing
company
, he can try for some other
company
also
 by taking his own time to fetch a better
job
. Undoubtedly,
Money
 can buy lots of things, but
money
 cannot buy mental piece, health, love and affection.
Finally
, to conclude, in my view, sacrificing some penny and working for a
company
 where we get
job
satisfaction
 is more advisable
Submitted by syedakhadija1981 on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • remuneration
  • financial security
  • motivation
  • luxuries
  • material possessions
  • fulfillment
  • work-life balance
  • stress levels
  • mental well-being
  • job security
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