Some people believe that is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situation. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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sistuation
the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time
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that we can meet in our action. It has both bad and good situation that makes us feel terrible, but if we can try and improve
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our advancement will become better because if we can look with it that mean that we can accept and fix it and accept the bad situation make our life become bad and we cannot grow up in our advance. Try to surface with the bad
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sistuation
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is really difficult. Sometimes it makes us feel we are the loser and everything will become very bad. But if we can try to fix it, make it become better our soul will become better. After that,
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will give us a lesson and make us feel happier, stronger, make us more confident and we can surface to every bad
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, we can not improve ourself and movement will become very worst. Accept a bad
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the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time
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as unsatisfactory job or shortage salary make us feel bad all the time. We cannot think anything without that
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sistuation
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. We worry about that every time and it makes our improvement, our family decrease in everything.
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, if we just think about the bad salary that we have in our job everything we see will become expensive, so that we don't want to buy it and we can not take care ourself carefully. Our expansion will become terrible and cannot be like others person who always want to improve a bad situation that has surfaced too. To sum up, try to improve the bad
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sistuation
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make our improvement become better, make us stronger, more confident in life. We can improve our soul, our family. In my opinion people who can change their bad thing will become successful in their exercise in everything.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Contentment
  • Resilience
  • Personal growth
  • Endurance
  • Initiative
  • Advancement
  • Catalyst
  • Financial stability
  • Status quo
  • Innovation
  • Missed opportunities
  • Life satisfaction
  • Adverse situations
  • Taking control
  • Risk assessment
  • Change management
  • Self-improvement
  • Motivation
  • Stagnation
  • Proactivity
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