Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays we all read on
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the news
that many shocking crimes are done by
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They kill their own classmate with gun and so many
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Many psychologists opine that the primary causative factor for
this
growth in crime rates are the lack of social and emotional education
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I definitely agree with
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Firstly
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today's offspring
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is not involved
is not involving
will not be involved
in outdoor activities
instead
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they are wasting their time idly
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in front
of
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the computer
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on TV
screen
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According to a recent survey done by child
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health welfare
association India
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the virtual world can hinder the growth of expression of emotions and have reduced face to face communication
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youngsters
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Youngsters
must cry when they feel sad and laugh when they are happy
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But today they just put a status quote on
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friends, they
will definitely get more emotional support through kind words and can reduce tension and pressure of their daily life when they are being surrounded by peers
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a child is more sensitive to negative emotions and they have a tendency to imitate their seniors
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social structure children
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totally withdraw
from active social life
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families have
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a single child
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result, they
have nobody to play with or express their emotions
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Parents are busy with their jobs
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therefore
children may feel unwanted and they pretend themselves as their favourite
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video game
character
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Unfortunately
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these characters are featured with violent attitude
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hence
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an
uncomfortable situation they act based
up on
in contact with, on top of
upon
their
instict
inborn pattern of behavior often responsive to specific stimuli
instinct
and their memory is
feeded
provide as food
fed
fitted
faded
with wrong doings
such
as bullying
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beating
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wrestling others
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To conclude
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the substantial increase in juvenile delinquency is basically related to immature emotional growth and less opportunities for social gathering
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So I definitely agree with the
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Aggression
  • Conflict resolution
  • Empathy
  • Parental guidance
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Media influence
  • Peer pressure
  • Social acceptance
  • Violent crime
  • Youngsters
  • Anti-social behavior
  • Socialization
  • Emotional intelligence
  • Psychological development
  • Crime prevention strategies
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