Some people say that the main environment problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems

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It's

said that endangered

aspects

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aspect

of beasts and herbs are basic issue related to

environment

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the environment

. While others assumed that

there

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they're

more significant and serious environmental issues that have to be solved. It seems to be pathetic that the

progeny will

loose

fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense

lose

the chance of beholding and observing some

fellas

a boy or man

fellows

villas

of both animals and plants. But what about the utility that they have been

bringing

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brought

to our

earth

to our lives. We will never be able to fill up the emptiness of it

inspite

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in spite

whosoever and whatsoever it

is grow

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is growing

has grown

is grown

grows

is to grow

hideous flies to tremendous elephants.<br>

Moreover there

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Moreover, there

are miscellaneous environmental problems caused by

mankind which

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mankind, which

are currently unresolved and without decision and they cause a serious threats that were and are jeopardizing the place where reside grow and perish.<br> The

first

is overpopulation of residents of

earth

which will surge amount of consuming to that degree in which it would

became

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become

as an intricacies  to feed provide with

needs

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the needs

and

accomodation

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accommodate

accommodation

accommodations

the inhabitants of our planet.<br> And pollution is as serious threat as

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the issues

mentioned above. And all sorts of them are identically  dangerous. I mean every kind of pollution is eminently poisonous harmful for

huminity

the quality of being humane

humanity

and the solution is what both

earth

and ranks sorely needs. And if we

wont

feel or have a desire for; want strongly

want

won't

went

fulfill  the

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solution, there

may not be minimum safe distance and we might just vanish or go under or transfer residents of

earth

into

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relating to a single dimension or aspect; having no depth or scope

one-dimensional

planets

that is

unbelievable

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1Word repetition
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Lexical resource: 4.0

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endangered species
biodiversity
ecosystem
habitat
extinction
climate change
deforestation
pollution
global warming
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