Some people say that the main environment problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems

Its
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It's
said that endangered
aspects
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aspect
of beasts and herbs are basic issue related to
environment
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the environment
. While others assumed that
there
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they're
more significant and serious environmental issues that have to be solved. It seems to be pathetic that the
next
progeny will
loose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
the chance of beholding and observing some
fellas
a boy or man
fellows
villas
of both animals and plants. But what about the utility that they have been
bringing
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brought
to our
earth
to our lives. We will never be able to fill up the emptiness of it
inspite
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in spite
whosoever and whatsoever it
is grow
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is growing
has grown
is grown
grows
is to grow
hideous flies to tremendous elephants.<br>
Moreover there
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Moreover, there
are miscellaneous environmental problems caused by
mankind which
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mankind, which
are currently unresolved and without decision and they cause a serious threats that were and are jeopardizing the place where reside grow and perish.<br> The
first
is overpopulation of residents of
earth
which will surge amount of consuming to that degree in which it would
became
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become
as an intricacies&nbsp; to feed provide with
needs
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the needs
and
accomodation
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accommodate
accommodation
accommodations
the inhabitants of our planet.<br> And pollution is as serious threat as
issues
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the issues
mentioned above. And all sorts of them are identically&nbsp; dangerous. I mean every kind of pollution is eminently poisonous harmful for
huminity
the quality of being humane
humanity
and the solution is what both
earth
and ranks sorely needs. And if we
wont
feel or have a desire for; want strongly
want
won't
went
fulfill&nbsp; the
solution there
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solution, there
may not be minimum safe distance and we might just vanish or go under or transfer residents of
earth
into
intedimensional
relating to a single dimension or aspect; having no depth or scope
one-dimensional
planets
that is
unbelievable
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • endangered species
  • biodiversity
  • ecosystem
  • habitat
  • extinction
  • climate change
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • global warming
  • sustainable
  • conservation
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