Some environmentalists have advocated building wildlife sanctuaries to protect endangered species. Discuss the Advantages and disadvantages of doing this.
Many environmentalists suggest that rare
species
in the wildlife
should be protected in secured
animal Suggestion
securing
scanturies
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sanctuaries
this
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This
drawbackes
of above suggested measure.
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drawbacks
,
it is true that Accept space
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nowaday's
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
,
many Accept space
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species
are on verge of extension
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extending
This
is mainly due to either climatic changes or some humanactivities
like hunting and Suggestion
human activities
poarching
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poaching
,
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,
wildlife
sancturaies
are a consecrated place where sacred objects are kept
sanctuaries
appropriate place
to Suggestion
an appropriate place
the appropriate place
appropriate places
lookafter
.Another advantage of keeping Suggestion
look after
this
certain breeds
in Suggestion
breed
such
places is with regards to their health.These sanctuaries
are often provided by trained keepers ,
which are responsible for Accept space
,
fulfil
their basic need and providing hem safe breeding facilities.Suggestion
fulfilling
Thus they
ensured their secured habitat to thrive.
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contrary
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the contrary
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there are certain negative aspects of keeping endangered Accept space
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species
in the wildlife
sanctuaries
are apparent.Firstly
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species
are born
to be certain climateSuggestion
bear
,
which makes difficult for them to survive in Accept space
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other
climate.Let take an example of Pandaany of various alternatives; some other
another
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they use to live in Accept space
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cold climate
and if they bound to live in Suggestion
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the weather
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its
hard for them to survive.Another possible drawback is exploitation.it is
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ther
might be a Suggestion
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chances
that these rare Suggestion
chance
species
could be used for entertainment purpose in order to make money.For instance
, in many nations places
like zoos and Accept comma addition
nations, places
sanctuaries
delibilatery
kept such
kind of rare species
to show and disply
to show, make visible or apparent
display
for
amusement Suggestion
of
buisnesses
.
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businesses
business
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of developing new promote over another
favour
wildlife
sanctuaries
because they feel ,
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safe to protect it is
it's
such
valueable
endangered having great material or monetary value especially for use or exchange
valuable
species
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there are clear disadvantages seen with the advantages.Accept space
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
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- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite