Some people believe that reading stories from books is better than watching TV and playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In

modern era

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the modern era

, humankind has been submerged with the burgeoning development of advanced technologies. It is commonly thought that the advantages of reading books outweigh those of watching TV programmes and playing video games. To my viewpoint, I completely agree with

this

notion for the following reasons. To commence with, several significant benefits of printed texts should be taken into consideration.

First

and foremost,

reading

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Reading

books

stimulates

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stimulate

children’s imagination and logic thinking. With a view to understanding the context, they have to congregate,

analyze

consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning

analyse

and infer information in details. That triggers their creativeness and brain reactions

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Accept space

.

Additionally

, children who read books frequently have more scopes to boost up language skills

.

Accept space

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Since books are plentiful sources of words, a kid can enhance his vocabulary as well as pronunciation.

Therefore

, it leads to a solid base of languages, which improves their ability to express their ideas confidently and obviously.

However

, the digital devices

such

as computer, TV has some considerable drawbacks to children if improperly used.

Initially

, children are likely to suffer from some problems

such

as obesity or backache owing that they spend a long time sitting in front of

screen

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the screen

a screen

screens

instead

of doing other activities. Some researches have proven the relation between screen time and obesity. A couch potato is more prone to get obese than usual.

Secondly

, if children are not under parental control, their personalities may be adversely affected by violent or depraved contents contained in films or games. It can lead to

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

behavioural

deterioration in teenagers. In short, I strongly believe that children should be encouraged to read more rather than use

technological

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technology

products since it is an effective way to study and better for health.

Nevertheless

, parents and children should be fully aware of potential

drawbacks so

Accept comma addition

drawbacks, so

as to make the most of aforementioned modern tools.