Write a letter to an editor of a newspaper about a mistake from a recent article. Include What the mistake was How they can correct it How to avoid this mistake in the future

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Dear Sir, I am

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regular reader of your

newspaper

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, ‘The Nation’ and love to read all the articles, especially those are published weekly in the special editorial section on Friday. I am writing

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letter to inform you about the mistake published in one of the articles,

last

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month.

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month was celebrated as the society heiress by your

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and picked a few stories about social workers. Despite

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being a great

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, the error of the content could not influence the audience and I want to highlight those issues which are incorrectly printed about his personal life. He was mentioned as a retired soldier from the army, whereas he was retired as a doctor from the Navy.

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, he has been

practicing

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for 10 years as a social worker and printed

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article

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mention as a doctor. I would request you to kindly publish the

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again with the corrections as it will enhance

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social reputation

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. It is

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good initiative by the

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to publish the life history of

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people. It would be great if the details of their personal life can be verified with them before publishing in the

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in order to avoid

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errors in the future. Looking forward to

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the corrections in the

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in the coming days. Regards, Barry Richardson

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

223 words

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Write a letter to an editor of a newspaper about a mistake from a recent article. Include What the mistake was How they can correct it How to avoid this mistake in the future

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Some people believe that international trade and communication with other countries is a positive trend, while others think it is harmful to nations and they might lose their identities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Computer games are very popular for all ages and nationalities. Parents think this has little educational value and it will be harmful for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is better to run your own business than to work for someone else. To what extent do yo agree or disagree?

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?