The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. Give reasons for your answer and indicate any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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than the present. I disagree with the statement.
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with, life expectancy of one person
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we have in the present and I think it will be more
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due to the said reason.
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that can easily detect illness are invented and will be in the
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, there is a
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, I believe because of the human are more
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • 1. Standard of health
  • 2. Average
  • 3. Lower
  • 4. Future
  • 5. Aging population
  • 6. Chronic diseases
  • 7. Sedentary lifestyle
  • 8. Lack of exercise
  • 9. Poor dietary habits
  • 10. Environmental pollution
  • 11. Technological advancements
  • 12. Impact on health
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