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The typical teaching situation of a teacher and students in the class will not exist by the year 2050. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The traditional educational process typically assumes that students are learning under supervision of a teacher in a classroom.
However
, there is a tendency to believe that guided learning and other conventional traits of education can be faded away by 2050. I truly believe that the teaching system will be light years ahead of what we have at
present moment
Suggestion
the present moment
 due to the technological breakthrough and drawbacks of teacher-led lessons.
Firstly
, robots may provide insightful knowledge and assess students’ performance
instead
 of human teachers. Recent technological innovations demonstrate that human
labor
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
 can be replaced by machines as well as robots are able to perform the same work at the same level. The modern educational system is not the exception
for
Suggestion
to
 that.
Internet
Suggestion
The internet
 is already full of reliable sources, which could be used by students independently.
For instance
, some schools and esteemed universities
such
 as Cambridge practice autonomous learning via laptops with guidelines.
Secondly
, plenty of situations related to teacher-student relationships shows that there are alarming drawbacks associated with
this
 type of teaching and learning. The human factor leads to some educators having
biased attitude
Suggestion
a biased attitude
 towards different students.
Thus
, unfair evaluation can very likely discourage students from taking part in the subject, thereby they lose natural inquisitiveness. The education authorities are already concerned with
this
 issue,
therefore
 the tradition of teacher-led
studying
Suggestion
study
 can be replaced by something else in
further
 future. To conclude, I suspect that though studying process is tightly related to guided learning, technological development and detrimental sides
of
Suggestion
by
 providing information through human will change the perspective of educating systems. 260 words
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technology advancements
  • virtual learning
  • online education
  • individualized learning
  • personalized learning
  • facilitative role
  • collaborative learning
  • evolve
  • adapt
  • social interaction
  • communication skills
  • teacher-student relationships
  • flexible learning
  • lifelong learning
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