Some people think that companies and private individuals should pay to clean up the pollution that they produce, not the government. To what extent do you agree?

It cannot be denied that the increasing pollution came from big companies and people because of the waste product they produces.

Thus

,

rising

increasing in quantity or value

raising

the concern that both should pay for their acts rather than the government. I definitely agree

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with

this

idea but

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idea, but

it can be

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resolved

with a comprise. In

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essay I will tackle the reasons and give my opinions.

To begin

, It is appropriate for companies and people to pay what they are doing with the environment. Waste products brought by these individuals

rises

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rise

the pollution of the country because of the neglect of each and everyone. It is evident that companies are the huge source of these pollutions

where as

on the other hand

whereas

people in the

society

takes part. If these people will become more responsible the pollutions would be

lessen

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lessened

.

However

, Not only the

governement

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

is suffering from

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this, but

also

the

society

as a whole. Tourism

are

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is

less attractive because of these pollutions and with

this

the income of the country suffers which can be considered as a payment from public officials.

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a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true

argument

being said,

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writers

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writer

believes that these can be

solve

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solved

with a compromise. Government sectors should make a law regarding the proper waste segregation for the two as a whole, if these rules are not followed there should be an appropriate fine for everyone.

For example

, these rules are done in some countries like in Singapore, they are strict with these guidelines which helps them maintain their environment.

In addition

, public officials can

also

step up to make a project with regards to the clean and green act of the community by

this

not only the people can benefit but

also

the

society

. To conclude, Both companies, people and government should put into consideration the welfare of the

country

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country, thus

thus

responsibility of each

individuals

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individual

arises with all of them pays back to the

society

which is needed.