Some people feel that the media influences social behavior, while others feel it simply mirrors it. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.
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media
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of people as well as mirrors it. Things which are shown in manner of acting or controlling yourself
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shows etc
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of people is social media. It has resulted in a lot of negative impact on manner of acting or controlling yourself
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a few people's minds
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They feel a constant need to be in a competition with others which is a negative thing. Sometimes they forget to enjoy the moment itself in order to present it through photos and videos properly on social media. Social media Accept space
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion