Some people feel that the media influences social behavior, while others feel it simply mirrors it. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.
Few people believe that social
behavior
is affected by manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
media
, while others think it simply reflects it. The essay will Suggestion
the media
firstly
discuss how it influences social behavior
of manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
people
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people, then
then
secondly
if it only mirrors it .
In my opinion, media Accept space
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affects
social Suggestion
affect
behavior
of people as well as mirrors it. Things which are shown in manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
media
are imitated by Suggestion
the media
people whether
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people, whether
This
kind of exposure is not good in some cases. For example
, bad
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the bad behaviour
bad behaviour
behavior
of people shown on TV shows etc
is for entertainment Accept comma addition
shows, etc.
shows etc.
purpose but
some people inculcate Accept comma addition
purpose, but
such
behavior
in manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
thier
real life which make them socially bad. Another example is reality showsof them or themselves
their
,
they can change the way public behave as they have a lot of dramaAccept space
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,
people might try to adapt that in day to day life with Accept space
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also
good influence of media on social
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the social behaviour
social behaviour
behavior
of people. Like, watching good programs improves social
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the social behaviour
social behaviour
behavior
of people. Also another
topic which affects social Accept comma addition
Also, another
behavior
of people is social media. It has resulted in a lot of negative impact on manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
few people's mind
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a few people's minds
few people's minds
.
They feel a constant need to be in a competition with others which is a negative thing. Sometimes they forget to enjoy the moment itself in order to present it through photos and videos properly on social media. Social media Accept space
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also
mirrors social
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the social behaviour
social behaviour
behavior
of people
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people, for
for instance
crime shows which reflects peoples
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people's
behavior
and indeed helps in creating awarenessmanner of acting or controlling yourself
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behaviours
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think that media affects as well as reflects Accept comma addition
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social
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the social behaviour
social behaviour
behavior
of people. Too much bad media can affect social behavior
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behaviour
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion