The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The transformation of
town
Correct article usage
the town

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the
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into the

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town
center
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centre

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area is depicted in the two maps. Other than the eastern and western areas which have been left undeveloped , the central part is undergoing noticeable changes mainly through the addition of paths , housing and other facilities.
Firstly
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,
main
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the main

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road , which is in middle is lined with shops , connects opposite sides of the town
center
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centre

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and
additionally
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allows access to the park and school . shops
in
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on

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northern
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the northern

The noun phrase northern side seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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side of the road
supposed
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are supposed

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to be replaced by a bus station , shopping
center
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centre

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, car park and new houses.
In addition
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main
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the main

It appears that the phrase main road does not contain the correct article usage. Consider making a change.

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road
in
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is

The word in doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

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going to be ruined and
then
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pavement
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the pavement

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is designed
instead
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. To the north ,
countryside
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the countryside

The noun phrase countryside seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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will be demolished and new accommodations will be instructed between
park
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the park

The noun phrase park seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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, which is smaller than now, and older houses .
Then
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all these buildings and constructions , except
school
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the school

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and living area in
south
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the south

The noun phrase south seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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, are
being
Unnecessary verb
apply

The verb being appears to be unnecessary here.

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surrounded by
Dual
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a Dual

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carriageway which is in oval shape .

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