The maps below show the center of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The transformation of

town

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the town

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the

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into the

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town

center

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area is depicted in the two maps. Other than the eastern and western areas which have been left undeveloped , the central part is undergoing noticeable changes mainly through the addition of paths , housing and other facilities.

Firstly

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main

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the main

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road , which is in middle is lined with shops , connects opposite sides of the town

center

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and

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allows access to the park and school . shops

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northern

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the northern

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side of the road

supposed

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are supposed

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to be replaced by a bus station , shopping

center

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centre

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, car park and new houses.

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main

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the main

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road

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going to be ruined and

then

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pavement

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the pavement

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is designed

instead

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. To the north ,

countryside

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the countryside

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will be demolished and new accommodations will be instructed between

park

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, which is smaller than now, and older houses .

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all these buildings and constructions , except

school

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and living area in

south

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the south

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, are

being

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apply

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surrounded by

Dual

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carriageway which is in oval shape .

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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3 paragraphs

169 words

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