Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local custom and codes of behavior. Do you agree or disagree ?

The past 50 years have seen

dramatic increase

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a dramatic increase

in the availability of

migration

. Some people are thinking it is

convenience and higher fee

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a convenient and higher fee

convenient and higher fee

;

however

, in

this

essay

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

intend to argue that

migration

can bring detrimental

affects

property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business

effects

to the people that departed in abroad.There are two primary reasons for

this

.

First

of all, it is an undeniable fact that

migration

to excess results in major problems.

For instance

, people should obey to local customs and behaviours when they arrived in the new country rather than forget their nationality.

However

, they moved in that place for better employment opportunities due

to

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to, such

such

as in our country could not

developed

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develop

higher salaries, economy for living fully

therefore

some people moved

for

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from

since

living to desire better life quality and for escaping harmful factors.

Neverthless

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Nevertheless

, more people want to reside in developed countries so that they

rellocate

manifest or bring back

reflect

allocate

country which have potent economy.

Especially they

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Especially as they

departed in Russia because that place convenient for educating, working and holiday

making

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makers

. They can get higher salary in every type of works where they

faged

reproduced fraudulently

forged

f aged

aged

forget

.

Further

and even more importantly, though

migration

can bring countless challenge anyway people prefer to moving. One particularly good

example people

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example, people

can not

can not

cannot

find good jobs because of lack of

languge

a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols

language

skills.

On the other hand

,

disproportionate burden

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the disproportionate burden

a disproportionate burden

of

mainting

keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"

maintaining

immigrants leads to tension in the society. It is

also

interesting to note that many people to

cross the

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cross, the

borden

an onerous or difficult concern

burden

border

for seeking

security

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secure

and safe future for their children.

For instance

, most people to approaching in the

Europian

of or relating to or characteristic of Europe or the people of Europe

European

Union for escaping wars. By way of conclusion,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

beleive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

that

goverments

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

governments

government's

will create conditions

fo

connects a noun with the preceding word

of

for

people do not migrate in foreign countries. As well as overseas

can not

can not

cannot

provide with cosiness for

living

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living, then

then

they try hard working for reaching better life.