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In some countries, most people prefer to rent a house than buying one. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of renting.

#countries #people #rent #house
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Dear Mr.Smith, I am writing
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, "Mastering Grammar and Vocabulary", which I borrowed from you three weeks ago. As you know, I had asked you to lend
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book
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 to me because I required more information on grammatical rules in English for my final exam. Reading and practicing the exercises provided in the
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 has helped me gain a good command over the language. My grammatical fluency and accuracy while writing essays
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have drastically improved
 over the past two weeks. I apologize for returning
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 two days later than the date that we agreed upon. Unfortunately, my grandmother, who lives in a different town, had an accident, and she needed my presence. She was admitted to a local hospital, and I had to stay overnight. Thank you for lending me the
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 letter and hope that you accept my apology. Yours sincerely,
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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