You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: • correct the information in the article • explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information • suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to inform you that the article published in your popular international travel magazine a couple of weeks ago, 150th edition, has some factual error about my hometown, Amritsar and it requires the immediate correction. In fact, the article in your magazine says that the War

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is closed on Sunday while the correct information is that it is closed on Monday and it is imperative to provide the correct information to the tourist visiting the city. By the way, correcting the particular day off in your magazine is very important for the livelihood of the people of my hometown because they heavily rely on the tourist who came to visit the same on Sundays. I would like you to kindly publish the right information in your

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edition with the correction notice about the previous mistake so that the travellers should not get confused about the day off of the museum. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Ankita Sharma

raj kumarWed Jul 08 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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8 paragraphs

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Topic Vocabulary:

Rectify
Misrepresentation
Tourism
Editor
Credibility
Accuracy
Local heritage
Fact-checking
Repercussions
Counteractive measures
Publishing ethics
Clarification
Factual error
Misconception
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