A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world

In the present scenario, tourism plays an important role in the financial income of
economy
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the economy
despite of the fact that if tourism doesn’t control correctly can cause numerous impacts on the country.
This
essay will discuss the benefits derived from travelling like
income revenue
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income, revenue
along with the demerits of exploitation of the resources.
Firstly
,
holiday travelling
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holiday, travelling
brings
income revenue
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income, revenue
in the country which makes the economy stronger
in addition
to
this
holds a valuable position globally.
Secondly
generates employment opportunities which
further
will enhance the society in every
aspects
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aspect
.
For example
in UK
LAST
2019
,
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,
THE BIGBEN was the highest tourist spot visited according to Economic
Times which
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Times, which
further
increase revenue and job opportunities by 12%.
Furthermore
, it helps
expacts
a person who is voluntarily absent from home or country
expats
to come and explore our ancient culture
,
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,
traditions
,
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,
different languages and made the world aware of it that how
richly
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rich
our culture is
.
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.
Nevertheless
, despite of a lot advantages, the main disadvantage of tourism is exploitation. Exploitation should be stopped at these
scared
concerned with religion or religious purposes
sacred
places by not allowing unnecessary people in the tourist spot which can harm the property. Proper rules and guideline to be allotted to them before entering any ancient building consist of a minimum number to be entered
,
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,
stated a fine if somebody violates any rules.
In addition
to
this
, no cameras should be allowed so nobody can take pictures and make
duplicate
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duplicates
of your property
.
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.
For example
IN BURGHIMGHUM PLACE in UK, NO CAMERAS ARE ALLOWED and if they found anyone to take pictures 6 months jailed is the punishment for violating
rule
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the rule
rules
. To conclude, Tourism can be the biggest aspect of money in every
country despite
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country, despite
of the fact that it should be
preserve
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preserved
correctly without any exploitation.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

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Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable tourism
  • ecotourism
  • heritage sites
  • hospitality industry
  • tourist influx
  • cultural commodification
  • ecological footprint
  • economic diversification
  • carrying capacity
  • cultural sensitivity
  • destination marketing
  • travel advisories
  • visitor management
  • impact assessment
  • tourism revenues
  • authentic experience
  • visitor satisfaction
  • conservation efforts
  • seasonal fluctuation
  • social sustainability
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