University students often focus on subjects. However, some people think that students also focus on other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

University is the place where students get depth information about

subject

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the subject

along with practical skills. Some individuals say that students should only focus on teaching,

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they must enrol in other extracurricular activities said by opponent people. I strongly disagree and say that other curricular activities are being played crucial part of the university experience.

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essay will emphasize some supportive arguments to my opinion and relevant example. To commence with, there are several arguments which proved that students must participate in other activities.

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and foremost, educational subjects are not being provided

skills

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the skills

of leadership, co-operation with colleagues;

however

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,

this

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is only

possibled

capable of happening or existing

possible

by

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participation

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participating

in competitions and other events.

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, by

participation

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of events

,

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,

in

leter

happening at a time subsequent to a reference time

later

latter

life, a layman will not face problems during work with

opposite gender

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the opposite gender

and express their idea with others.

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, according to Mumbai university, over 95% of leaders has been developed by

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participation

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participating

in events in school or college period. There is one more supportive argument,

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this

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, spending most of times with books can be the possible reason of increased stress level, so that by other curricular activities, pupils can acquire refresh mind and elevate concentration level

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;

therefore

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, they will focus on

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study

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the study

as well as other routine activities.

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, students has concentrate more if they can participate in other competitions; said by Dr.Vikash shah

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doctor of brain hospital (Delhi)). Apart from above all mention arguments, there is one argument, which support to alternative view. The most profound one is, by giving more importance to other recreational activities, students who cannot concentrate on their

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study

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studies

and feel hesitation during

exam

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the exam

an exam

exams

;

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, they are being

getted

come into the possession of something concrete or abstract

got

gotten

cheated

lower grade

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a lower grade

lower grades

in

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study

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the study

and open the door of unsuccessful life.

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, according to Mumbai university, over 35% of pupils in India, had not been focusing on

study

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due to

enrollment

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in other activities. Henceforth to conclude, it is clear that with

help

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the help

of extracurricular activity, pupils can more focus on

study

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and develop some important skills like leadership, cooperation, whist by

participation

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, they lost concentration in

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study

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the study

studies

. I strongly say that extra activities play a crucial role in

students

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student

students'

student's

life.