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In many countries, traditional customs are being lost. Why you think is this happening? What schools and parents can do to stop it?

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In these days, so
many traditional code
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the many traditional code
have been demolished
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has been demolished
 in some nations. There are several factors why
this
 trend is being seen. To protect
this
 event, both of educational systems and household are responsible, and have
profound impact
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a profound impact
 on
this
 catastrophic process. There are some significant reasons why
tradition
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the tradition
 of society has disappeared.
Firstly
, by the passage of time, competitive firms, which follow the economic purposes, launch a wide range of cutting-edge technology. By using the latest items, people’s routine life has been eased.
For example
, having face-to-face communication has been replaced
with
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by
 sending messages by smart phones.
Secondly
, to adapt
new lifestyle
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a new lifestyle
 with
new generation
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the new generation
, old customs are stimulated by many factors, because people are not enthusiastic about these traditions.
Therefore
,
although
 traditional customs are proposed as one of the asset of countries, it sounds to people unknown due to being uselessness of its features. It is clear that the responsibility of parents and schools about traditions cannot be neglected. They can introduce some traditional customs to children, and using
this
 old principle by family members and academic persons, both of which have
vital role
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a vital role
on
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in
 children’s upbringing, is the best method to preserve customs.
Additionally
, learning and practicing the old customs in the school and house would have more tangible effects on children who can maintenance these principles to convey them until
next generation
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the next generation
. It can be done by devoting customs into the students’ courses which are one of the considerable materials to extend customs for children. To sum up, so many nations are witness of forgetting traditional customs due to the many reasons which are rooted in technology and time.
As a result
, family members and schools can be effective for eradicating of
this
 trend.
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