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You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course explain why you need a week off say what you want the Principal to do.

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Dear John, I am a student of Web and mobile application course for more than two years, and it is my
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college.
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 two years, I never required a leave. But, in
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 contemporary situation, I need a week off during my class time. Actually, my father gets retried from his work and he organize a grand party, and he definitely wants my present, as he puts most of the arrangements on my shoulder. It is my humble request, please allow me a week off, I promise you, I will cover all my pending works, whenever I will back from home. I will not give you a chance of any complaint. I will appreciate
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your kindness. your's faithfully, kkk
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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