You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course explain why you need a week off say what you want the Principal to do.

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Dear John, I am a student of Web and mobile application course for more than two years, and it is my

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college.

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two years, I never required a leave. But, in

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contemporary situation, I need a week off during my class time. Actually, my father gets retried from his work and he organize a grand party, and he definitely wants my present, as he puts most of the arrangements on my shoulder. It is my humble request, please allow me a week off, I promise you, I will cover all my pending works, whenever I will back from home. I will not give you a chance of any complaint. I will appreciate

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your kindness. your's faithfully, kkk

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7 paragraphs

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are currently taking a course at a college but you will need to have a week off during this course. Write a letter to the college Principal. In the letter give details of your course explain why you need a week off say what you want the Principal to do.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinions