You have organized to go on holiday with your friend. However, you must change your plans. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Tell them how much you are looking forward to the holiday • Explain why you must change your plans • Suggest alternative arrangements

Hi Emily, I hope you are doing well. It’s been a long time that we have had
on
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a long vacation and
hence
we decided to go
for
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trekking in Vermont
this
weekend. Unfortunately, we must cancel our plan due to some unavoidable circumstances. I know how much
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we were to go for
this
trekking since winter. It would have been a great experience for us to climb at the peak, touch the flowing stream water, and watch the bright orange sunset together.
However
, there is a
last
-minute change in one of the schedules of my current course at the university and
hence
I need to work on an important project. The
last
date of submission of the project is
this
weekend, failing to do so can result in repeating the course. Apart from
this
, I need to review some of the research articles which will occupy my weekdays and so I can’t prepare for the trek.
However
, I am ready to compensate for our cancelled plan and have another plan.
Instead
of going on
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trekking
this
weekend. We can go to visit my grandma’s place after
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of my course in Miami, Florida. We can travel by road to her place which will
also
be a great road trip. We can go
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scuba diving and relax on the beach later. I know how much you wanted to do
this
. I am sorry for the
last
-minute cancellation. But, please let me know your thoughts on the new plans at my grandma’s place. Your friend, Amy
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