You have organized to go on holiday with your friend. However, you must change your plans. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Tell them how much you are looking forward to the holiday • Explain why you must change your plans • Suggest alternative arrangements

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Hi Emily, I hope you are doing well. It’s been a long time that we have had

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a long vacation and

hence

we decided to go

for

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trekking in Vermont

this

weekend. Unfortunately, we must cancel our plan due to some unavoidable circumstances. I know how much

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we were to go for

this

trekking since winter. It would have been a great experience for us to climb at the peak, touch the flowing stream water, and watch the bright orange sunset together.

However

, there is a

last

-minute change in one of the schedules of my current course at the university and

hence

I need to work on an important project. The

last

date of submission of the project is

this

weekend, failing to do so can result in repeating the course. Apart from

this

, I need to review some of the research articles which will occupy my weekdays and so I can’t prepare for the trek.

However

, I am ready to compensate for our cancelled plan and have another plan.

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of going on

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trekking

this

weekend. We can go to visit my grandma’s place after

completion

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of my course in Miami, Florida. We can travel by road to her place which will

also

be a great road trip. We can go

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scuba diving and relax on the beach later. I know how much you wanted to do

this

. I am sorry for the

last

-minute cancellation. But, please let me know your thoughts on the new plans at my grandma’s place. Your friend, Amy

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

258 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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children who are brought up in families that do not have large amount of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brough up by wealthy parents. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?