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With an increasing percentage of the population communicating via the internet and text messaging, face to face communication will become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree?

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The maps describe the planned development of the
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
 of a small town named Islip between the present and the future. The most noticeable change is the construction of dual carriageway roads. In the present, there is only a main road, and two roads straighten to school and
park
;
however
, as can be seen in planned development's layout,
a round
in the area or vicinity
around
 dual carriageway will be constructed, and the main road will be changed into a pedestrian road. There are some other significant changes to note, which is the improvement of new transportation. A bus station will be opened, and a car
park
 will be made
next
 to the shopping
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
. According to housing areas, there will be a high rise in a number of housing properties. Two more housing areas will be built facing each other. One will be
next
 to the car
park
, and the other will be
next
 to the
park
.
Although
 many facilities will be opened, the size of the
park
 will be smaller in the future.
Finally
, the south side of numerous shops will be
stayed
Suggestion
staying
 in the same appearance.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancement
  • Digital communication
  • Societal norms
  • Online communication
  • Younger generations
  • Quality of personal relationships
  • Misunderstandings
  • Emotional depth
  • Remote work
  • Virtual meetings
  • Physical presence
  • Social isolation
  • Mental health issues
  • Face-to-face interactions
  • Resilience
  • Irreplaceable
  • Healthcare
  • Education
  • Personal connection
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