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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Sharing
information
 helps people to build their
knowledge
. Certain people believe that exchanging
information
 related to scientific research, business and the academic world
is
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are
 important, whereas others think that there is no need to share some of the valuable
information
 freely. One evident benefit of exchanging
information
 helps a
person
 to expand his
knowledge
. Every
person
 does not have every
information
 on a
subject but
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subject, but
 when we exchange details our
knowledge
 expands manifold. To illustrate, a
person
 preparing for his exam by doing group study, will know more about the subject in less time than a
person
 studying individually.
On the other hand
, sharing
information
that is
 valuable and important can lead you in serious situations as you don't know whether the other
person
 is trustworthy or not.
For instance
, there was a case recently where a
person
 working on a scientific formula shared his theory with his group, one of the
member
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members
 of that group used
this
information
 for his own benefit and sold that formula. To conclude, sharing
information
 is a key to expand one's
knowledge but
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knowledge, but
this
 may
also
 result in passing on some of the salient details
.
Accept space
.
 In my opinion, people must ensure what
information
 are
least valuable
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less valuable
 and would not affect anyone if they are shared, only
such
 details need to be shared
insted
in place of, or as an alternative to
instead
 of
whole thing
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the whole thing
. In
this
 way, one is able to expand his
knowledge
 without any serious complications.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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