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Some people think that is better to educate boys and girls in separate school. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed school. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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There are two educational systems of co-educational and specific schools by gender in the world
,
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,
 which both of them have
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
 advantages and disadvantages.
while
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While
 some people
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believes
believed
 that separate
school
 is better for children to focus on their tasks, others believe that mixed
school
 is much better for their future lives. I believe that the
second
 option is much better as
prepares
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prepared
preparing
 them for better social lives. According to some individuals isolate schools for both male and female students are associated with an increasing concentration level of children
on
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with
school
 tasks. If children
at
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At
school
 be only boys or girls, there will not be any distraction
at
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of
classess
a collection of things sharing a common attribute
classes
.
In other words
,
they
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They
 can focus on the lessons in class and acquiring higher grade will be their main goals and not the being more attractive to the opposite
sex
 peers
.
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.
 In Iran,
for example
, as there is not any mixed high
school
 the average final grades
of
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on
 them in 2018 were 30% higher than their counterparts in western countries
such
 as Canada.
Although
above statistic
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the above statistic
 is correct, it cannot change
this
 reality that a lot of them will fail in their social lives even with the high scores. Others
,
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,
including myself, hold a view that being sociable person is much more important to
children
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children's
child
 lives.
That is
 provided by mixing them at schools. Even though
school
 children are very
young but
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young, but
 they need to learn their social skills and dealing with
opposite
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the opposite sex
sex
 at the
begining
the event consisting of the start of something
beginning
. To put it another way, if they do not learn how to talk and behave when see the different
sex
 classmates
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,
they will not be able to do it in future. In Iran
,
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,
for instance
, according to
2018 report
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a 2018 report
the 2018 report
 of
schools
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school
 counselling departments, 80% of persian students do not know how to
peoperly
in the right manner
properly
 talk or find
girl
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a girl
 or boy as a friend after high
school
 graduation;
thus
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Thus
, in their future lives they will not be able to cooperate and connect with the different
sex
 and that will have a deleterious effect on their adulthood' lives. In conclusion
,
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,
despite the fact that isolate
school
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the school
 assists students to just focus on their subjects
,
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,
scores and tasks, being successful and ability to connect with
opposite
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the opposite sex
sex
is
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are
 more important, which I
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
 that cannot happen unless students be in the co-
eduactional
relating to the process of education
educational
 environments. If some countries like Iran had
co-educational environment
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a co-educational environment
, their residents would not have had lots of difficulties in their social lives and misbehaviour in their adulthood
.
Accept space
.
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