News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news, and would it be better if more good news was reported?

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In today's world news are the crucial part of our
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life
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there is no doubt that the news broadcasted on TV and printed on newspaper all are in the hands of news editors
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In my opinion
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there are
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a plethora
of reasons which influence their decisions.
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Firstly there
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Firstly, there
are a number of 'profit-minded' news editors who
broadcast
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the
news with
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news, with
lots of 'crunchy' and 'spicy' material. They always prefer TRP rates over general important news.
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, they prefer the debates on caste system or news related with crimes than new discoveries or inspiring case studies
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Moreover
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the viewers and the readers
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always show
have always shown
are always showing
more interest towards negative news.
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, political pressure is
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a point of concern. Many news editors never
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or print 'anti-government' News or scams.
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In fact
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they always hide the Dark Side of the political leaders. But
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these criminal and negative news always impacts the mind of teenagers.They
copies
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are copied
have copied
are copying
these crimes like theft, murder and robbery. So, these news editors should act as a 'society builders' and should encourage more positive news
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They should
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factful and
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factual, and
factual and
tactful and
accurate news and motivate the citizens with good positive news.They should
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and print stories of successful people, some great discoveries
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patriotic stories and positive case studies. In conclusion, it is true that news editors are the
responsible
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responsibility
of the news which are broadcasted or printed.
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, they should facilitate positive news more than the negative news so as to have a good impact on the society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Demographics
  • Engagement
  • Relevance
  • Urgency
  • Natural disasters
  • Political upheavals
  • Public health concerns
  • Advertising revenue
  • Sponsorship deals
  • Market competition
  • Editorial policies
  • Censorship
  • Newsworthy
  • Desensitization
  • Bad news fatigue
  • Negativity bias
  • Balanced view
  • Social media
  • Viral content
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