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In today’s job market, it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applicants may not need any formal qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this question?

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Skills gained through practice and knowledge acquired from books are two things that go
hand
 in
hand
 in learning.
Hence I
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Hence, I
 partially disagree that formal qualifications entirely fall in value in the forthcoming future
for
Suggestion
since
 they are the main foundation of any practical sphere. On the one
hand
, practical skills are of much importance for workers to perform their duties and tasks both efficiently and effectively. There are certain things which can only be obtained by means of years’ of experience.
For example
, dressmakers and hairdressers gain valuable
skills thereby
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skills, thereby
 training for many years. Interestingly, some of the widely recognized faces, like Bill Gates and
Jek
a man who serves as a sailor
Jack
 Ma have no any formal education, yet they are doing wonders in the world.
On the other
hand
, being qualified can be a matter of life and death in some professions. Theory can be even more critical in the job market than expertise of any kind, form and sort.
For instance
, but for diplomas and degrees, professionals,
such
 as doctors and teachers would not be capable of performing and fulfilling their work.
Moreover
, without the basic skills like mathematics and arithmetic or writing and reading, workers
can not
can not
cannot
 function at a professional level. One striking example is accounting. Not knowing the foundations of numbers, they may find themselves
hopeless
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hopelessly
 in the workplace or even redundant. To summarize, theoretical knowledge and practically-gained skills are closely connected with each other. Even though more emphasis is put on experience in the job market today, it would be a big mistake to ignore formal qualifications
for
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since
 they are the basis of any profession.
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