Parents, usually mothers, decide to stay at home to look after their families, rather than going back to work. Therefore, it is thought that they should be receiving some payments from the government for doing that. What is your opinion on that ?
Some of us think that when you become a parent, you have to involve in your child's education and for
this
is better to quit the Linking Words
job
and stay with the baby.In order to have enough money for a decent life, Use synonyms
mother
of father should have some financial backing from the state.Use synonyms
This
is a topic who divides opinion, but I sustain the idea of backing mothers with money or other benefits, but until the baby is ready to go to a kindergarten.
Nowadays, we live in a century where women play an important role in society.A woman can be a Linking Words
mother
and at the same Use synonyms
time
a very successful business woman.When she becomes a Use synonyms
Use synonyms
mother she
has to put on the Accept comma addition
mother, she
first
place her children.Many of them has some frustration because they have to quit their Linking Words
job
.Because to have a baby is a full Use synonyms
time
Use synonyms
job
, women should be sustained by her family and by society with some benefits.There are many organizations who help single Use synonyms
mother
to raise their child and I think we humans have to support Use synonyms
this
idea.Linking Words
For example
, a Linking Words
mother
has many responsibilities, comparing with a father, keeping the house clean, cooking, making shopping all of Use synonyms
Linking Words
this
require plural of "this"
these
time
and effort.The government should sustain women who want to stay at home with their children not only with money, but with preferential program at work like, to go home earlier, to give them Use synonyms
time
off when their children are seek.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, a Linking Words
mother
is a woman too, and she needs to have a career.I do not think Use synonyms
that is
better for women to stay home with children more than two years.In Linking Words
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day there are a lot of possibilities to let children at kindergarten or after school.I think that fathers should be implicated in the education of children and help their wives in Linking Words
this
.Is better for children to see their Linking Words
mother
like an active person, not only like a housekeeper, is an example for their future.
To sum up, I support the idea to give mothers some benefits, but at the same Use synonyms
time
to offer support to come back to their Use synonyms
job
or activities before of being mothers.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite