Parents, usually mothers, decide to stay at home to look after their families, rather than going back to work. Therefore, it is thought that they should be receiving some payments from the government for doing that. What is your opinion on that ?
Some of us think that when you become a parent, you have to involve in your child's education and for
this
is better to quit the job
and stay with the baby.In order to have enough money for a decent life, mother
of father should have some financial backing from the state.This
is a topic who divides opinion, but I sustain the idea of backing mothers with money or other benefits, but until the baby is ready to go to a kindergarten.
Nowadays, we live in a century where women play an important role in society.A woman can be a mother
and at the same time
a very successful business woman.When she becomes a mother she
has to put on the Accept comma addition
mother, she
first
place her children.Many of them has some frustration because they have to quit their job
.Because to have a baby is a full time
job
, women should be sustained by her family and by society with some benefits.There are many organizations who help single mother
to raise their child and I think we humans have to support this
idea.For example
, a mother
has many responsibilities, comparing with a father, keeping the house clean, cooking, making shopping all of this
require plural of "this"
these
time
and effort.The government should sustain women who want to stay at home with their children not only with money, but with preferential program at work like, to go home earlier, to give them time
off when their children are seek.
On the other hand
, a mother
is a woman too, and she needs to have a career.I do not think that is
better for women to stay home with children more than two years.In this
day there are a lot of possibilities to let children at kindergarten or after school.I think that fathers should be implicated in the education of children and help their wives in this
.Is better for children to see their mother
like an active person, not only like a housekeeper, is an example for their future.
To sum up, I support the idea to give mothers some benefits, but at the same time
to offer support to come back to their job
or activities before of being mothers.Submitted by mioara81.p on
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