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The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society? How can this problem solved?

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Food
 is an essential source for humans. Nowadays, The people are not maintaining a healthy diet
food
 due to their hectic pressure in the job. Unfortunately, They have stored
food
 in a fridge for a long day in order to manage their timings. Obviously, It leads to the
obesity
. There is a chance those who intake of unhealthy foods having a high risk of
health
 issues
such
 as Sausage, French fries, Burger and frozen meats, which leads to Heart failure, Cholesterol, Disorder issues and joint problems. The people have not been planning their
food
 habits regularly. Certainly, There is an another reason of
obesity
 is increasing in the community,
such
 as avoidance of exercise, yoga and Zumba. Especially, Those who have eaten
food
 at late night. There should be time given between the bedtime and dinner time.
This
 could be solved by the
government
.
Firstly
, The
government
 has organized a campaign in the
health
 centre to advise the
health
 benefits
such
 as diet control and
food
 habits.
Secondly
, The people must be surveillance their
health
 conditions with advice of a physician.
Lastly
, The
government
 has allotted a fund for
this
 condition in order to reduce a
obesity
.
Consequently
, The people have shown care to maintain their
health
. In conclusion, I suggest that people should be taking precautions of their
health
 condition.
Otherwise
, It links with the outcome of their productivity and decrease of their life as well. At
last
, The
government
 plays a vital role and they must be taken initiative in the society to control
obesity
 because it reduces human life.
Submitted by Karthikaa Ramachandran on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • obesity
  • sedentary
  • caloric intake
  • genetics
  • nutritional awareness
  • processed foods
  • fast food
  • lifestyle diseases
  • preventative measures
  • tax incentives
  • urban planning
  • community gardens
  • wellness initiatives
  • dietary guidelines
  • physical fitness
  • calorie-dense
  • portion control
  • metabolic rate
  • health literacy
  • food deserts
  • work-life balance
  • junk food
  • BMI (Body Mass Index)
  • non-communicable diseases
  • food labeling
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