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Some believe that it is the responsibility of people to take care of the environment. Others say it is the government that should take care of the environment. Discuss and give your opinion

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Global worming is the major concern of the todays world.Some opinion that people should take care of the
environment
. On the other side some think that it's all about the
government
 who should responsible for healthy
environment
.In my opinion, it is the responsibility of both the citizen of the country as well as
government
 itself in following essay I will discuss all the aspects. At
first
, each individual is responsible to take care of the
environment
.Because without our contribution
government
 can't do anything.
For instance
, there are many rules made by the
government
 to keep the atmosphere clean. Now it's up to us to obey the rules.Beside
this
 there are many ways we can keep our surroundings clean by using less polluted way of transit and by planting trees and
such
 on.
However
, There are many ways that
government
 can
also
 help to make the
environment
 clean by imposing strict rules. Like exhaling less unhealthy fumes by factories as well as limiting people to use vehicles that spread more pollution.
For example
, in Sweden
government
 make rules for limited use of personal vehicle in cities during weekends and
this
 leads to a major improvement in air quality in less time, So by making law and regulation
government
also
 play a vital role to combat against the problem. To conclude, it is the responsibility of both and any one of them fail to do so leads to failure of both.
Hence
 it like clapping not possible without two hand same as people and
government
 are two hands and without their effort we can't save the
environment
.
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