In many cities of the world, traffic congestion is a serious problem.   What are the causes and what can be done about it?

Nowadays, in every country all masses are busy in their hectic lifestyle they mostly prefer for travelling by own vehicles. So that's by
traffic
jams
problem
increases in the city
dayday
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day day
by day. It is series issues for
traffic
peoblems
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
and there are the lots of solutions to be overcome
.
Accept space
.
The
first
and foremost reason is that people are doing jobs in most of cities and the cities area was very congested
therefore
the parking is
main
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the main problem
problem
.
Accept space
.
All though many individuals park
there
of them or themselves
their
cars on
roads
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the roads
and they stuck
traffic
.
Accept space
.
the
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The
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
reason is that many countries as not proper roads and rules
this
is the main cause of accidents that by daily
number
of people loss their life. In modern ere
evey
(used of count nouns) each and all of the members of a group considered singly and without exception
every
single person
prefer
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prefers
for travelling own
person
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personal
vehicle they are not
prefer
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preferred
car pulling so
thats
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that's
by
traffic
james
press tightly together or cram
jams
games
increases sharply. The uncountable solutions are available to overcome
this
problem
first
of all government make
proper rule
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a proper rule
And regulations for people they get higher fines if they are broke
traffice
the aggregation of things (pedestrians or vehicles) coming and going in a particular locality during a specified period of time
traffic
rules and give harder punishment.
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Besides this
they adopt even and odd car
number
rule because one days
goes
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go
even
number
cars on
roads
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the roads
and
second
day goes other
number
cars and government
strat
a thoroughfare (usually including sidewalks) that is lined with buildings
street
start
state
car pulling than people are
shere
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sharing
share
sure
their cars with
othe
definite article
the
other
masses as well as which assists to decrease
traffic
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the traffic problem
problem
. To conclude, in
this
day and age
traffic
is the main issue for
james
a contest with rules to determine a winner
games
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and it can we easily overcome if we are doing proper cooperate with
government
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the government
.
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Which
is beneficial for
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characteristic of humanity
human
humans
boads
the entire structure of an organism (an animal, plant, or human being)
bodies
as well as
nature
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naturally
.
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