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n many countries people tend to move overseas or move to a different part of their country after their retirement. Discuss why they do so and what the outcome of this situation is. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion

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Nowadays, some people will choose to move overseas after their retirement. Because they yearn for the lifestyles and cultures which is totally different with their motherland. Especially the citizens are living in
developed
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developing
 countries.
Therefore
, I want to give my opinion of why they want
moving
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to move
 abroad.
First
, a part of the immigrants want to let their live get more adventures. Usually, they
were having
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had
 so many
stress
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stresses
at
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in
of
 the work before retirement.
That is
 why they want to get more travel experiences. Because they really need to try and take a load off their mind.
Second
, because they want to save their money. The
third
 world countries become the best choice of them. We know that they are not only enjoying in beautiful sea island views, but
also
 just spend half price
in
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on
 every items compare with their countries.
Therefore
, living in gorgeous south
asia
the nations of the Asian continent collectively
Asia
 countries is the
tend
turn sharply; change direction abruptly
trend
 to western.
As a result
, I believe that both of you and I will have a chance to move overseas in the future.
Although
 everyone has a different reason for moving to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 country. Everyone still has same reason which
is we
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are we also hoping
is we also hope
also
 hope we can have a better retirement life. Cause we deserve it after the thirty years working.
Submitted by Claire Lin on

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