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You have a friend who has always liked the car you currently drive. Now you have decided to sell the car. You think your friend might be interested in buying it. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter, say why you want to sell your car describe the condition of the car invite the friend to come and see the car himself/herself someday Write at least 150 words.

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Hopefully, You are doing great. As you are aware that I have been using a BMW
car
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 for four years in cyan colour. You too were interested to buy the same kind of
car
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while
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a while
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 ago.
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 is the right instance to explain my
car
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 conditions because I got a job opportunity in the united states of America and I suppose to be joined within a month.
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, I'm looking for a good buyer at the moment to settle in a cash payment. Immediately, I thought that you had deliberated as well. The condition of the
car
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 is in
an
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excellent working condition. I had done the service and replaced the
car
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 parts
by
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with
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 the latest. It will be working
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 for several years. I have a job to complete in your city
next
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 week.
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, I request you to have a look at my
car
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. Indeed, You will like it predominantly.
This
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 is the golden astonish certainty. Please let me know if you are interested
as
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in
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same
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the same
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. Awaiting
for
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your prompt reply as soon as possible. Thank You

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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