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Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

#organisations #employees #dress #value #quality #work #appearance
Nowadays
thid
denotes a person or thing
this
 issue is becoming increasingly popular. The growing number of people consider that smart dressing style of
workers
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the workers
 can create a controversy assumption, while others believe that the
work s
buildings for carrying on industrial labor
works
 done is more valued than their look. I partly agree with it and in my point of view good looking is important
,
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,
nevertheless
quality
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the quality
 of
work
also
 plays a crucial role. On the one side, it is thought by some smart people that uniform presents itself as a dress code. Many people's
first
 judging toward someone else is based on how they are looking.
In other words
, it determines whether
worker
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a worker
the worker
pay
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pays
 attention to himself or
not make
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not, make
 people to analyse will he be able to be professional in his job.
As a result
, if the
first
 impression of people about employees is good, these employees' organizations will get more
work
 contracts, by which they can obtain benefits to become
succesful
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
.
On the other hand
, some companies argue that employee's appearance is less essential than his
work
 quality.
Although
, a worker is well dressed, he does not have suitable
work
 skills and
hardworking
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hard working
.
Therefore he
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Therefore, he
 will become the cause of
defect
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the defect
a defect
 or failure
for
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of
 his company and after that the reputation of it will surely decline which can lead to be knocked out. To sum up, even though the employee is dressed well, it does not mean he is skilled enough and has appropriate knowledge. It seems to me that it would be better if all business
intitutions
an organization founded and united for a specific purpose
institutions
 carefully considered all benefits and drawbacks of
this
 issue.
Submitted by Murod Zufarov on

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