Governments should spend more money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays issues about construct and use
roads
are becoming increasingly popular. It is thought by some smart people that Use synonyms
government
should invest more money into Correct article usage
the government
railways
than Use synonyms
roads
. I partly disagree with Use synonyms
this
and in my point of Linking Words
view
it would be better if Add a comma
view,
Correct article usage
the authority
authority
made a contribution to both of them equally. There are certainly Fix the agreement mistake
authorities
sample
reasons to spend taxpayers' money on Correct your spelling
ample
railways
. Use synonyms
Firstly
, it is clear Linking Words
this
type of transportation is safe and fast. Linking Words
In other words
, by using it people can save time and they do not have to be worried about their safety. Linking Words
Secondly
, trains do not emit poisonous gases which pollute Linking Words
air
, Add an article
the air
while
cars and buses do it anytime. Linking Words
Finally
, trains do not get stuck in traffic, which means that people can reach their destinations in time. Better still, in most countries around the world, train fares are considerably lower than bus fares or taxi fares. On the flip side, we cannot forget about Linking Words
roads
. In some areas of the Use synonyms
world
it is impossibleAdd a comma
world,
Add the particle
to
railways
. Use synonyms
In addition
, rail networks are not able to reach all corners and nooks of Linking Words
city
or country. It is undeniable that Correct article usage
the city
majority
of individuals own a car and look forward to luxury and convenience Correct article usage
the majority
while
commuting to the office, Linking Words
thus
prefer to use their own vehicle rather than singing in for Linking Words
railways
. Use synonyms
Therefore
the condition of Linking Words
roads
should be paid attention and proper actions have to be taken to repair any damage on them. Use synonyms
To sum up
, it would be better if Linking Words
government
considered both Add an article
the government
benefits
and Correct article usage
the benefits
drawback
of Fix the agreement mistake
drawbacks
railways
and Use synonyms
roads
, which are essential forms of transport Use synonyms
system
. Having a good transportation system in place is a preferred choice of almost every individual, which should be addressed by the administration.Fix the agreement mistake
systems
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