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There is an increasing number of people who do not know their neighbor. What causes this situation? How to solve it? Give your own idea.

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The diagrams illustrate the way in which cameras were
developing
Suggestion
developed
 from 1839 to 2000. Overall, it can be clearly seen that cameras became smaller and more complex during two centuries.
Also
 could be mentioned that inventions were becoming lighter due to different materials decades by decades. According to the
first
 photo,
the earliest
Suggestion
the earlier
 model, the
Daguerrotype
a photograph made by an early photographic process; the image was produced on a silver plate sensitized to iodine and developed in mercury vapor
daguerreotype
, was invented in 1839.
This
camera
, which was made from wood, was 36
centimeters
a metric unit of length equal to one hundredth of a meter
centimetres
 in length and consisted of three box-shaped sections.
Also it
Accept comma addition
Also, it
 had
brass lens
Suggestion
a brass lens
 at the front side. Almost 50 years later
second
camera
, Kodak No.1, came onto the market. As it is shown in the illustration, the metal
camera
 was shaped like a cube with 16
centimeters
a metric unit of length equal to one hundredth of a meter
centimetres
 in width, and it was twice smaller than
first one
Suggestion
the first one
. Following that, Leica 1 was released in 1925. It was noticeably narrower than previous ones and had numerous buttons along the top.
However
, the material remained the same, as in Kodak
camera
.
Finally
, the digital
camera
 was introduced in 2000. It is clear from the data that the
camera
 was the smallest above all.
Moreover it
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Moreover, it
 was the
first
 invention, which was made of plastic and had the zoom lens. It is interesting to note that it was equipped with LCD screen and internet connection.
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