Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things.Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Small number
Suggestion
A small number
of individuals believe in the importance of commercials in creating a buying power among consumers, whereas there
are
Suggestion
is
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
group of people who don't give
weightage
to any kind of marketing strategy.
This
essay will discuss the points in favour or not in favour before making any opinion. Getting to know about new products in the market, is only possible with a help of
media
Suggestion
the media
.When individuals see
a
Suggestion
an
add in the form of newspapers,
pamflets
a small book usually having a paper cover
pamphlets
, and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
nT
make (textiles) by knitting
knit
.V with their notable features, consumers become curious and eager to go and look for a specific product. With that, people become aware of the products that are launched recently in society.
Moreover
,
sale
Suggestion
the sale
sales
of that particular thing
will increased
Suggestion
will increase
, which in
rreturn
go or come back to place, condition, or activity where one has been before
return
returns
retain
beneficial
Suggestion
benefits
to the
manufactureres
a business engaged in manufacturing some product
manufacturers
manufacturer's
manufacturer
as
welll
(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')
well
as sponsors, and
wil
the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention
will
prove to a
booser
for
economy
Suggestion
the economy
.
For example
, in a recent
study published by,
Suggestion
study, published by
" The Hindustan Times", advertisements raised 65% sales of the total every year.
On the other hand
, in an absence of any advertisement, buyers stay unaware of the new products
tha
pointing out something
that
are
avaliable
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
outside, that make them stuck with a usage of old fashioned things and these costumers are not able to feel themselves a part of present society. After that, sales will decrease and production sectors will face a loss.
For example
, in a recent report published by, " The Times," twenty percent of companies declared
bankcruptcy
a state of complete lack of some abstract property
bankruptcy
due to lack of promotions. To conclude, based on the above discussions, I
compeletly
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
agree with the benefits of
advertiements
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisements
and how they make consumers aware of what is available and at what price.
This
makes shopping
more easy
Suggestion
easier
easiest
and cost effective as
comapred
examine and note the similarities or differences of
compared
to not using any source of promotion.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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