More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development.

Indeed, tremendous changes
has been brought
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have been brought
by technical appliances at every facet of life globally. Irrefutably, computers and mobile phones
has made
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have made
life easier. Due to it, most of
workers
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the workers
doing office
work
at
home
. According to me by doing
work
from
home
have more fruitful effects rather than drawbacks. My
further
notion about
above given statement
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the above given statement
as follows:
Initially
, an ample of fruitful results behind
this
phenomenon. The prime one is,
time
saving by
this
approach. Because when workers travel
everyday
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everyday, then
then
they consume
lot
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a lot
of
time
and traffic jam is
also
a big problem while
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
.
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.
Such
as nowadays everyone
use
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uses
their own vehicle due to it, traffic and pollution increase day by day. Whereas, if they do
work
in
home
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a home
homes
the home
they can solve
this
issue.
Secondly
, in the modern era, women
also
do part
time
and full
time
jobs by which they
do not do take
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do not take
don't take
aren't taken
aren't taking
are not taking
are not taken
have not taken
care of
children but
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children, but
if they do
work
remotely
then
they would spend
their quality of
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their quality time
time
with their family members. Admittedly, ' as every coin has two sides' so behind
this
phenomenon have
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
adverse effects on human life.
First
of all, by
doing
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will work remotely communication among employees get
getting work remotely communication among employees
has work remotely communication among employees gotten
has work remotely communication among employees got
is work remotely communication among employees getting
was work remotely communication among employees getting
doing work remotely communication among employees get
work
remotely communication among employees get distorted because when employees go office daily they meet different people by which they learn many things from them but it is not possible when they do
work
at
home
.
Moreover
, due to it, they become more lazy and unhealthy.
As a result
, they can face many health problems. In conclusion,
although
by doing
work
remotely employees
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remotely, employees
remote employees
face many tackles but its positive effect cannot
neglected
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neglect
by humans because through
this
way they can save their
time
and so many things.
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